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김하일/2024-08-21

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I would have to say that my favorite public transportation is bus. I mean, I really like to take buses. They are truly convenient especially in my country, south korea. I can go everywhere I want to visit without that much try. Moreover, it is much cheaper than taking taxies or other transportation. I am truly satisfied in taking buses cuz I can also arrive my destination with watching outside's scenery. It is so stunning if I take bus when sun is rising or falling. I really love it. Those are why i like buses the most. Thanks!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Gilbert!

It’s nice to know that you enjoy riding buses and find it entertaining as well. I also feel the same way when I take the bus to other provinces in my country. I get to do some sightseeing while on the bus and enjoy it while listening to music on my headset.

- T. Caitlyn

I would have to say that my favorite public transportation is bus.

>> I would have to say that my favorite form of public transportation is the bus.

I mean, I really like to take buses.

>> CORRECT

They are truly convenient, especially in my country, South Korea.

>> CORRECT

I can go everywhere I want to visit without that much try.

>> I can go everywhere I want to visit without much effort.

Moreover, it is much cheaper than taking taxies or other transportation.

>> Moreover, it is much cheaper than taking taxis or other forms of transportation.

I am truly satisfied in taking buses cuz I can also arrive my destination with watching outside's scenery.

>> I am truly satisfied with taking buses because I can also reach my destination while enjoying the scenery outside.

It is so stunning if I take bus when sun is rising or falling.

>> It is so stunning when I take the bus as the sun is rising or setting.

I really love it.

>> CORRECT

Those are why i like buses the most.

>> These are the reasons why I like buses the most.

Thanks!

>> CORRECT