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what were mornings like in your house when you were a kid ?

박순호/2024-08-21

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I don't remember when I was very young, but I remember it from when I was 7 years old and entered elementary school. At that time, I had to walk a long distance to elementary school, and I always had a hard time getting up in the morning, so I think my mother woke me up. And from the time I entered middle school, I had a difficult morning. I am from the countryside, and my parents worked as farmers and also raised several cows. My parents were busy with farming, so it was my brother and my responsibility to take care of the cows. So, I would wake up early in the morning and go out to the field to gather grass for the cows to eat before going to school. So at that time, I really hated waking up in the morning and I also hated cows a little. However, after I entered high school, my parents no longer made me take care of the cows so that I could focus on my studies. my parents no longer made me take care of the cows so that I could focus on my studies. When I look back on those days now,

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I don't remember when I was very young, but I remember it from when I was 7 years old and entered elementary school.

>> I couldn't recall the early years, but I do remember it from when I started elementary school at age 7.
At that time, I had to walk a long distance to elementary school, and I always had a hard time getting up in the morning, so I think my mother woke me up.

>> I recall that I had trouble getting out of bed in the morning and that my mother had to wake me up because I had to walk a long way to elementary school at the time.
And from the time I entered middle school, I had a difficult morning.

>> Then I had a rough morning right after middle school started.
I am from the countryside, and my parents worked as farmers and also raised several cows.

>> I was raised in the countryside and my parents were farmers and had several cows.
My parents were busy with farming, so it was my brother and my responsibility to take care of the cows.

>> My brother and I were in charge of looking after the cows because our parents were out farming.
So, I would wake up early in the morning and go out to the field to gather grass for the cows to eat before going to school.

>> In order to harvest grass for the cows to eat before heading to school, I would get up early every morning.
So at that time, I really hated waking up in the morning and I also hated cows a little.

>> I therefore disliked mornings and cows somewhat at that time.
However, after I entered high school, my parents no longer made me take care of the cows so that I could focus on my studies.

>> However my parents stopped making me take care of the cows when I started high school, so I could concentrate on my studies.
my parents no longer made me take care of the cows so that I could focus on my studies.

>> I was able to concentrate on my schoolwork since my parents stopped making me taking care of the cows.
When I look back on those days now,

>> Those were the days when I was a kid.