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What do you think is the best way to go to school? Explain.

차유진/2024-08-20

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I think going to school by car is the best way because car is comfortable and fast. And I think go to school onfoot because it's slow but healthy for me.
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Good evening, Yale!

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                         What do you think is the best way to go to school? Explain.


I think going to school by car is the best way because car is comfortable and fast. 
>> I think going to school by car is the best way because a car is comfortable and fast. 

And I think go to school onfoot because it's slow but healthy for me.
>> And I think going to school on foot is also good because even if it's slow, it's healthy for me.
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