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Writing task: What do you think are the disadvantages of getting up early?

김명기/2024-08-20

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Getting up early is related to shortage of sleep. The shortage of sleep makes the immune system's quality low. And I often feel sleepy. I got up eary this morning so I fell asleep while writing these sentences.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, MK!

Thank you for doing your homework. I agree that waking up early can mean less sleep and can make us feel tired and sleepy. However, as you mentioned in class, despite its disadvantages, it’s still better to wake up early so we can be more productive.

- T. Caitlyn

Getting up early is related to shortage of sleep.

>> Getting up early is related to a shortage of sleep.
The shortage of sleep makes the immune system's quality low.

>> A shortage of sleep lowers the quality of the immune system.
And I often feel sleepy.

>> CORRECT
I got up eary this morning so I fell asleep while writing these sentences.

>> CORRECT