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How do you decide on your travel destinations?

이진태/2024-08-20

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I consider something when I should decide on travel site. Primary factor is a distance. beacuse I don't like to go far. I feel stuffy when I take a plane. Second factor is budget. it's also important. Third one is new places. I always want to go to new places. so, I give plus point to new places.

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Hi! I’m really happy you made the effort to complete the homework. You did a wonderful job expressing your experiences and ideas—keep up the great work!^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

I consider something when I should decide on travel site.
>> I consider a few factors when deciding on a travel destination.

Primary factor is a distance. beacuse I don't like to go far. I feel stuffy when I take a plane.
>> The primary factor is distance because I don't like to travel far; I feel uncomfortable when flying.

Second factor is budget. it's also important.
>> The second factor is budget, which is also important.

Third one is new places. I always want to go to new places. so, I give plus point to new places.
>> The third factor is whether the place is new to me. I always want to explore new destinations, so I give extra consideration to those.