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How does social media influence the way people communicate with each other?

신봉규/2024-08-19

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
social media makes people to share message, photos in real time and to respond immediately.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi! I’m glad you found the time to do the homework. You did a remarkable job sharing your experiences and thoughts—keep it up!^^
 ~~Teacher Ryka^^

social media makes people to share message, photos in real time and to respond immediately.
>> Social media allows people to share messages and photos in real time and respond immediately.
OR >>  Social media enables people to share messages and photos instantly and respond right away.
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