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How many hours a week should people work?

이지윤/2024-08-19

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In Korea, it is generally set to work 8 hours a day. If you work on weekends, you have to pay more at work. So, you work 5 days for 8 hours excluding weekends, you will work 40 hours a week. That's why the person can averagelly work 40 to 52 hours a week. But in my personal opinion, it would be better to work less hours. It would be nice to work a small amount of time and get a lot of salary, but there are no cases where you work a small amount of time and get a lot of salary. Therefore, it would be better to work within the time range set by the country.

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Hello, Yun!~

Thank you for sharing your perspective on the given topic. Keep doing a good homework ^_^

Chammy

In Korea, it is generally set to work 8 hours a day.

>> Correct
If you work on weekends, you have to pay more at work.

>> If you work on weekends, you have to get paid higher at work.
So, you work 5 days for 8 hours excluding weekends, you will work 40 hours a week.

>> So if you work 5 days for 8 hours excluding weekends, that makes 40 hours per week.
That's why the person can averagelly work 40 to 52 hours a week.

>>That is why a person could be working an average of 40 to 52 hours per week.

But in my personal opinion, it would be better to work less hours.

>> However, in my opinion, working fewer hours is preferable.

It would be nice to work a small amount of time and get a lot of salary, but there are no cases where you work a small amount of time and get a lot of salary.

>> It would be ideal to work for a short period of time and earn high pay, but there are no such examples.

Therefore, it would be better to work within the time range set by the country.

>> Correct