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What is your favorite thing about your previous workplace?

임주미/2024-08-19

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
My the best favorite thing was recognized others about my work and I can make steady life Also I enjoyed to meet new client .They gave me a energy and inspiration
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Jumi! I guess you really enjoyed your previous job! Thank you for sharing these wonderful insights about your job. Have a great Monday! ^^
~ T. Jewel
My the best favorite thing was recognized others about my work and I can make steady life
>>My favorite thing about my work was being recognized by others for my work, which allowed me to lead a steady life.
Also I enjoyed to meet new client .
>>I also enjoyed meeting new clients.
They gave me a energy and inspiration
>>They gave me energy and inspiration.
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