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How do you balance relaxation and responsibilities while at home?

박소은/2024-08-17

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I have a monthly plan that I have to follow every day. For example, I have to finish chapter 3 ~ 4 of the psychology theory book and take an online course. After that, I can relax and take a break.

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Good day, Anna!

Your plan sounds well-organized! I hope you find time to relax and enjoy your break once you complete everything.

~Kelly^^

I have a monthly plan that I have to follow every day.

>> Correct

OR:

>> I follow a monthly plan every day.

For example, I have to finish chapter 3 ~ 4 of the psychology theory book and take an online course.

>> Correct

OR:

>> For example, I need to finish chapters 3 and 4 of the psychology theory book and take an online course.

After that, I can relax and take a break.

>> Correct

OR:

>> Once I have finished, I will be able to relax and take a break