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Fanfic of Harry Potter

박준현/2024-08-16

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Harry Potter, the most famous fantasy novel, and it has many fans. And this time, J.K writer doesn't write Harry Potter anymore. And fan write Harry Potter fanfic. Fanfic is fan fiction stories. And it has very many interesting stories.In some stories, Harry Potter and Hermione are lovers. Or Draco Malfoy and Harry Potter are best friends. Or, Harry has a cousin, Rae. He is also a wizard. In real story, Harry Potter and Hermione are just friends. And Harry Potter and Draco Malfoy is old enemy. And Rae isn't wizard, and he is old enemy to.
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Hello, John! Thank you for sharing~ I appreciate your time. I find fanfics really interesting and it's cool that fans some up with stories that are very different from the original story.
-T. Sonny
Harry Potter, the most famous fantasy novel, and it has many fans. 
>>Harry Potter is the most famous fantasy novel and has many fans. 
And this time, J.K writer doesn't write Harry Potter anymore. 
>>Currently, J.K. Rowling, its writer, doesn't write Harry Potter anymore.
And fan write Harry Potter fanfic. 
>>Fans write Harry Potter fanfics.
Fanfic is fan fiction stories. 
>>Fanfic is short for fan fiction stories. 
And it has very many interesting stories.
>>And there are many interesting stories.
In some stories, Harry Potter and Hermione are lovers. 
>>Correct!
Or Draco Malfoy and Harry Potter are best friends. 
>>Some wrote Draco Malfoy and Harry Potter are best friends. 
Or, Harry has a cousin, Rae. 
>>Some made Rae Harry's cousin.
He is also a wizard. 
>>Correct!
In real story, Harry Potter and Hermione are just friends. 
>>Originally, Harry Potter and Hermione are just friends. 
And Harry Potter and Draco Malfoy is old enemy. 
>>Harry Potter and Draco Malfoy are old enemies. 
And Rae isn't wizard, and he is old enemy to.
>>And Rae isn't a wizard, and he is an old enemy, too.
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