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No matter which company you work for, all jobs will be stressful. mind control It's important

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Hey Kyle! Thank you for taking the time to do the homework! I'm glad you gave your best to answer the question. Keep it up! ^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

No matter which company you work for, all jobs will be stressful. mind control It's important

>>No matter which company you work for, all jobs can be stressful. That's why mind control is important.

OR >> Regardless of the company you work for, every job comes with its own stress. Controlling your mind is crucial.