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Describe your ideal bookstore.

차진혁/2024-08-15

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
My ideal bookstore is "Aladdin" in Korea. I usally read and buy Great people Exhibition in there, because I like Great people Exhibition and I can buy it at low price.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello again, Jimmy!

Here's another corrected composition. I appreciate your sending it. Please go over the revisions given below, such as not putting a comma before the word "because". See you tomorrow!   


Cheers,
Jean~~



                                     

                                                                      Describe your ideal bookstore.

My ideal bookstore is "Aladdin" in Korea.
>> CORRECT~~

I usally read and buy Great people Exhibition in there, because I like Great people Exhibition and I can buy it at low price.
>> I usually read and buy Great People Exhibition there because I like this book and I can buy it at a low price.
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