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임주미/2024-08-15

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I always check on with my famaily thire body condition or mind. I often ask for them " do work out, don't eat junk food and realax.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Jumi! Our family always comes first. ^^ Thank you for doing your homework. Have a great day!

~T. Jewel

I always check on with my famaily thire body condition or mind.

>>I always check on my family's physical and mental well-being

I often ask for them " do work out, don't eat junk food and realax.

>>I often remind them to work out, avoid junk food, and relax.