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Can you share a simple, healthy recipe you like to make?

박소은/2024-08-14

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This pic is my healthy dinner. Recipe is very simple. steamed some veggies, stem beans, scrambled eggs with potatoes add some cheeses. Prepare and eat deliciously!!

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Hi Anna!

Looks delicious! Thanks for sharing the recipe - I'll have to try it out sometime!

~Kelly^^

This pic is my healthy dinner.

>> Correct

OR:

>> This is a picture of my healthy dinner.

Recipe is very simple. steamed some veggies, stem beans, scrambled eggs with potatoes add some cheeses.

>> The recipe is very simple: I steamed some veggies and green beans, scrambled eggs with potatoes, and added some cheese.

Prepare and eat deliciously!!

>> Correct

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>> Prepare and enjoy!