I think the best part of my childhood is that I don't have to worry about a job and money. Nowadays I'm a bit worry about those things and quit stressful to me. I have to do my own job and earn money to do something that I want to enjoy, learn, play, ect. However when I was young, I didn't worry that much and I had many dreams. For example, I want to be a artist, designer, teacher, scientist and it changed a lot. Now, I have something for fun like hobbies but I don't know what I should do. So I miss my childhood actually.
Hi, Lin!
Thank you for doing your homework. I actually agree with you.
I hope you'd be able to find the thing that you really want to do!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some corrections:
1. I think the best part of my childhood is that I don't have to worry about a job and money.
>>CORRECT!
2. Nowadays I'm a bit worry about those things and quit stressful to me.
>>Nowadays I'm a bit worried about those things and it's stressful for me.
3. I have to do my own job and earn money to do something that I want to enjoy, learn, play, ect.
>>I have to do my own job and earn money in order to do something that I want to enjoy, learn, play, etc.
4. However when I was young, I didn't worry that much and I had many dreams.
>>However, when I was young, I didn't worry about it that much, and I had many dreams.
5. For example, I want to be a artist, designer, teacher, scientist and it changed a lot.
>>For example, I wanted to be an artist, a designer, a teacher, or a scientist but it changed a lot.
6. Now, I have something for fun like hobbies but I don't know what I should do.
7. So I miss my childhood actually.
>>So, I actually miss my childhood.