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Vegetarian

양기연/2024-08-14

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I have never thought about being a vegetarian because I haven't been determined to quit eatig all kinds of meat. Of course I stopped consuming red meat because of my health, but I like to eat duck meat or chicken. Sometimes I feel guilty and uncomfortable when I cook or eat duck or chicken. That's why I am gradually reducing all kinds of meat. Instead, I increasingly consume various seafood and vegetables.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Gi Yean!
Wonderful job on your sentences for this homework. I agree! I also feel guilty about eating animals; however, giving up meat can also mean losing some essential nutrients and vitamins that our body needs. I think we should carefully evaluate whether we are both mentally and physically ready to be vegetarians.
- T. Caitlyn
I have never thought about being a vegetarian because I haven't been determined to quit eatig all kinds of meat. 
>> CORRECT
Of course I stopped consuming red meat because of my health, but I like to eat duck meat or chicken. 
>> CORRECT
Sometimes I feel guilty and uncomfortable when I cook or eat duck or chicken. 
>> CORRECT
That's why I am gradually reducing all kinds of meat. 
>> CORRECT
Instead, I increasingly consume various seafood and vegetables.
>> CORRECT
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