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임주미/2024-08-14

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At the first, I always try to walk everywhere and prefer to take public transportation. also I walk fast as soon as possible.

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Hello, Jumi! I appreciate your effort to maintain your health despite your age. I hope I could do it as well. ^^ Happy Wednesday!

~T. Jewel

At the first, I always try to walk everywhere and prefer to take public transportation.

>>I always try to walk everywhere and prefer to use public transportation.

I also try to walk as fast as possible

>>I also try to walk as fast as possible.

>>I also try to walk quickly whenever I can.