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[HW]How do you handle conflicts or disagreements with friends?

강서율/2024-08-13

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I have an experience of having conflict with my friends because of the tendency. Unlike me who needs time alone, my friends want to do everything together. At first I tried to adjust but as it repeated couple of times, I decied to discuss about it. We had long, deep conversation and after the talk, we can respect each other. So I usually have a talk about the issue when I have to handle the conflict. But if the sincere talk does not work-actually it always worked- I may consider the compromise point that my friends and I can both satisfy.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Reading your answer helps me understand the kind of friend you are, Linda! Keep writing inspiring experiences.-Faith-

I have an experience of having conflict with my friends because of the tendency.

>> I have experienced conflicts with my friends because of certain tendencies.

Unlike me who needs time alone, my friends want to do everything together.

>> Unlike me, who needs time alone, my friends prefer to do everything together.

At first I tried to adjust but as it repeated couple of times, I decied to discuss about it.

>> At first, I tried to adjust, but as it happened a couple of times, I decided to discuss it.

We had long, deep conversation and after the talk, we can respect each other.

>> We had a long, deep conversation, and after the talk, we were able to respect each other.

So I usually have a talk about the issue when I have to handle the conflict.

>> Therefore, I usually discuss the issue when I need to handle a conflict.

But if the sincere talk does not work-actually it always worked- I may consider the compromise point that my friends and I can both satisfy.

>> But if a sincere conversation does not work—though it usually does—I may consider a compromise that satisfies both my friends and me.