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What’s the scariest thing about oceans?

박소은/2024-08-13

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I'm scared about the shark. There teeth are so scary.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Sunny!
You can express yourself really well.
I'm glad you continue to work hard.
You are truly a model student.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon

I'm scared about the shark.

>> I'm scared of sharks.
There teeth are so scary.

>> Their teeth are so scary.