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임주미/2024-08-13

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From this early year I started about my health so I on a diet and I am always trying to eat less I wish I want to be a health granma

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Hello, Ju Mi! Our health is precious; therefore, we should take good care of it. ^^ Thank you and have a great day!

~T. Jewel

From this early year I started about my health so I on a diet and I am always trying to eat less.

>>Since the beginning of this year, I’ve been focusing on my health, so I’m on a diet and trying to eat less.
I wish I want to be a health granma

>>I want to be a healthy grandma.