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신봉규/2024-08-12

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I usually like to rest on weekends. It says that I value balance between work and personal life.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hey Bong Kyu! Thank you for doing the homework today. I'm glad you were able to take some time.

~~Teacher Ryka^^

I usually like to rest on weekends. It says that I value balance between work and personal life.

>> I usually like to rest on weekends, which shows that I value a balance between work and personal life.