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Do you think today’s actors are better than those from 30, 40, or 50 years ago? Why or why not?
김명기/2024-08-12
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I think today's actors are similar to ancient actors.
Of course, today's knowledge and lectures are more plentiful than ancient.
However, ancient painters are as excellent as today's painters, though today's skill and analysis methods are improved.
I think a great actor is one who expresses their emotions clearly.
There were that kind of people, I don't talk about which time is better.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, MK!
I agree! Most of the time, we tend to focus on the talent of the actors rather than their age or generation. I also agree that current technology and facilities have given actors and actresses the opportunity to improve their craft.
- T. Caitlyn
- T. Caitlyn
I think today's actors are similar to ancient actors.
>> CORRECT
Of course, today's knowledge and lectures are more plentiful than ancient.
Of course, today's knowledge and lectures are more plentiful than ancient.
>> Of course, today's knowledge and lectures are more plentiful than those of ancient times.
However, ancient painters are as excellent as today's painters, though today's skill and analysis methods are improved.
However, ancient painters are as excellent as today's painters, though today's skill and analysis methods are improved.
>> However, ancient painters were as excellent as today’s painters, though today’s skills and analytical methods have improved.
I think a great actor is one who expresses their emotions clearly.
I think a great actor is one who expresses their emotions clearly.
>> CORRECT
There were that kind of people, I don't talk about which time is better.
There were that kind of people, I don't talk about which time is better.
>> Such people existed in both times; I'm not commenting on which era is better.
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