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ȸ ÷ֽ ۹Hi Eva,
Thank you for sharing your
thoughts on the question of having a perfect body or super intelligence. Its
wonderful that you appreciate yourself as you are and recognize the value in
trying every day to be healthy and improve. Your perspective on not taking
things for granted is really inspiring. Your writing is improving! Keep up the
great work!
~Teacher Cathy
If
possible, I want to have perfect body and super intelligent.
>>If
possible, I would like to have both a perfect body and be super intelligent.
In
reality I have bad body and ordinary intelligence. But I am satisfied with my
body and intelligence.
>>In
reality, I have a bad body and ordinary intelligence, but I am satisfied with
my body and intelligence.
If l
had perfect body, I don't know afraid and l had a lot of conceit.
>>If
I had the perfect body, I wouldn't be afraid, and I might become conceited.
Because
l have bad body, l try to be a healthy person, take care my body.
>>Because
I have a bad body, I try to be a healthy person and take care of my body.
If I
had super intelligence, I would try to gain without pains.
>>If
I had super intelligence, I would try to gain things without effort.
What
you get easily disappears easily.
>>CORRECT
OR>>What you get easily will disappear
easily.
I like
me who to try everyday.
>>I
like myself for trying every day.
I like
ordinary me.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I
like the ordinary version of myself.