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류건우/2024-08-12

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Q: What good things do you get out of camping/glamping? A: I think the best thing I get out of camping or glamping is thrilling experience. Since I live in nature, both camping and glamping can give me the thrill of uncertainty or the future I'll experience. Also, I can be thankful of my daily life by experiencing discomfort
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Paul!

Thank you for doing your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I think the best thing I get out of camping or glamping is thrilling experience.
>>I think the best thing I can get out of camping or glamping is the thrilling experience.

2. Since I live in nature, both camping and glamping can give me the thrill of uncertainty or the future I'll experience.
>>Since I live in nature, both camping and glamping can give me the thrill of uncertainty of the future I'll experience.

3. Also, I can be thankful of my daily life by experiencing discomfort.
>>Also, I can be thankful for my daily life by experiencing discomfort.

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