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At what age were you the happiest as a child?

임주미/2024-08-12

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Honestly, I didnt know what my child the happiest was? My parents always fought each other my father drank all the time.I scared of them ofen.
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Hi, Jumi! Thank you for being honest as you answer the question for your homework. Have a fun day today! ^^
~T. Jewel
Honestly, I didnt know what my child the happiest was?
>>Honestly, I didn’t know when I was the happiest as a child.
My parents always fought each other.
>>My parents always fought with each other.
my father drank all the time.
>>My father drank all the time.
I scared of them ofen.
>>I was often scared of them.
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