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What do you think of toy guns as toys for children? Are they good or bad toys for children? Explain.

차유진/2024-08-11

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I think played toy guns with children is good because toy guns is fun but toy guns are dangerous. I like toy guns
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Here's your revised homework, Yale. Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few revisions and alternative expressions provided, such as "I like",  "I love" or "I enjoy". See you soon! 


Cheers,
Jean~~




         What do you think of toy guns as toys for children? Are they good or bad toys for children? Explain.


I think played toy guns with children is good because toy guns is fun but toy guns are dangerous.
>> I think children love to play with toy guns because they are fun but I also think toy guns are dangerous. 

I like toy guns. 
>> OR: I enjoy playing with toy guns. 
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