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Do you buy souvenirs when you go on a trip abroad? Explain.

차진혁/2024-08-11

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I didn't buy souvenirs go on a trip abroad, because I went abroad just once. ^^ I surely will buy souvenirs go on a trip abroad next time.
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Here's your revised composition homework, Jimmy. I appreciate your sending it. Please go over the revisions given below, such as "travel abroad" which is similar to "go on a trip abroad". See you later!


Cheers,
Jean~~



                                     

                                         Do you buy souvenirs when you go on a trip abroad? Explain.


I didn't buy souvenirs go on a trip abroad, because I went abroad just once. ^^
>> I don't buy souvenirs when I go on a trip abroad because I went abroad just once and I didn't buy any that time. 

I surely will buy souvenirs go on a trip abroad next time.
>> I surely will buy souvenirs next time I travel abroad. 
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