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Describe a typical family unit and the importance of family in your country.

김혜선/2024-08-10

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

4 members of family is most common in Korea. I think the attention of family is very important because people who received a lot of family attention and love are more sociable and have higher self-esteem.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Ms. Kate! Thank you for sharing. In my country, extended families are usually common but I think, nowadays, couples choose to spend more time together than have children.

-T. Sonny

4 members of family is most common in Korea.

>>Nuclear family is the most common family type in Korea.

I think the attention of family is very important because people who received a lot of family attention and love are more sociable and have higher self-esteem.

>>Correct!