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Agust 7th homework

안연희/2024-08-09

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I enjoy shopping for swim wears. I normally shop alone because I usually shop online. I like shopping for the reason that new eqipment gives motivate to exercise.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi,

Thanks for sharing. Well done!

-Teacher Ash

I enjoy shopping for swim wears.

>>I enjoy shopping for swimwear.

I normally shop alone because I usually shop online.

>> CORRECT

I like shopping for the reason that new eqipment gives motivate to exercise.

>>I like shopping for the reason that new equipment gives me the motivation to exercise.