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My own Cafe

양기연/2024-08-09

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

If I had my own cafe,l would have lots of chances to meet various people. And it would be a hideout for my friends or acquaintances. Unlike running my own academy, I could have frequent breathers and I would feel freer.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Gi Yean!

I agree! This is like the ideal picture of owning a cafe. It sounds so nice to have friends over, and since it’s your cafe, you can stay there and hang out anytime without a time limit.

-T. Caitlyn

If I had my own cafe,l would have lots of chances to meet various people.

>> CORRECT

And it would be a hideout for my friends or acquaintances.

>> CORRECT

Unlike running my own academy, I could have frequent breathers and I would feel freer.

>> CORRECT