What my parents are proud of me is that I get good grades on the school exam because when I get good grades, I'm good and my parents feel good.
Your writing is getting better, Shin Woo! especially your sentence structure and use of connectors. Keep it up!
- Teacher Angela
What my parents are proud of me is that I get good grades on the school exam because when I get good grades, I'm good and my parents feel good
>> What my parents are proud of is that I get good grades on my school exams. When I get good grades, I feel good, and my parents feel proud.