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김지숙/2024-08-08

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

What my parents are proud of me is that I get good grades on the school exam because when I get good grades, I'm good and my parents feel good.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Your writing is getting better, Shin Woo! especially your sentence structure and use of connectors. Keep it up!

- Teacher Angela

What my parents are proud of me is that I get good grades on the school exam because when I get good grades, I'm good and my parents feel good

>> What my parents are proud of is that I get good grades on my school exams. When I get good grades, I feel good, and my parents feel proud.