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류건우/2024-08-08

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Q: What could happen if dishes are not cleaned well? A: People who are eating the meal would feel bad, and also it would be visually poor. Since the people know that the dishes are not cleaned well, they'll think there might be remaining something eaten before. Also, it would look bad, so they won't likely to eat on that dish.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Paul!

Thank you for doing your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some corrections:

1. People who are eating the meal would feel bad, and also it would be visually poor.

>>People who are eating the meal would feel bad, and it would also make the food visually poor.

2. Since the people know that the dishes are not cleaned well, they'll think there might be remaining something eaten before.

>>Since the people know that the dishes are not cleaned well, they'll think that there might be some remains of what was eaten before.

3. Also, it would look bad, so they won't likely to eat on that dish.

>>Also, since the dish would look bad, they wouldn't likely eat on it.