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Aside from financial reasons, why do we need to have a job?

현무/2024-08-08

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

if no financial reasons , i think no need need to have a job.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hey Kyle! Thank you for your ideas on this question. Keep going—you’re doing a superb job! ^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

if no financial reasons , i think no need need to have a job.
>> If there were no financial considerations, I don’t think it would be necessary to have a job.