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Are home-cooked meals the best? What’s the best thing to do after a lovely meal?

신봉규/2024-08-07

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I like home-cooked meals because it costs less. I want to save many money. I think the best thing to do after a meal is drinking a cup of coffee.
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Hey Bong Kyu! Thank you for taking time to do the homework even with your busy schedule. Keep it up~^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

I like home-cooked meals because it costs less.
>> I like home-cooked meals because they cost less.
OR >>I prefer home-cooked meals because they are more affordable.

I want to save many money.
>>  I want to save a lot of money. 

I think the best thing to do after a meal is drinking a cup of coffee.
>> I think the best thing to do after a meal is to drink a cup of coffee.
OR >> In my opinion, the best way to conclude a meal is with a cup of coffee.
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