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How is our accent affected by our birthplace?

임주미/2024-08-07

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I guess I affected my families's accent .we hear similar tone every day with close people . my mother use to use softy but my father use storong accent.

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I guess I affected my families's accent .

>>I guess I was affected by my family's accent.

we hear similar tone every day with close people .

>>We hear a similar tone every day from the people close to us.

my mother use to use softy but my father use storong accent.

>>My mother talks softly, but my father has a strong accent.