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What do Korean students usually do during their summer school vacation? How do they usually spend th

차유진/2024-08-06

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They are play games and go on a trip they are play games for a lot of times and normal The trip is for four nights and five days I think Korean students vacation plan is not good.
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Here's your revised homework, Yale. Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few revisions and alternative expressions provided. 


Cheers,
Jean~~



                           What do Korean students usually do during their summer school vacation? How do they usually spend their summer break?


They are play games and go on a trip 
>> They play games and go on a trip. 

they are play games for a lot of times and normal The trip is for four nights and five days
>> They play games for a long time and their trip usually lasts for four nights and five days. 

I think Korean students vacation plan is not good.
>> I think the Korean students' vacation plan is not good.
>> OR: I don't like the way Korean students spend their summer break. 
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