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What do you think is the most fun thing to do in the world? Explain.

차유진/2024-08-06

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I think the most fun in the world is playing because there are a lot of games and if I play games, I'm happy. The game is not 🎮.
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Here's your revised homework, Yale. Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few revisions and alternative expressions provided. Have a good night! 


Cheers,
Jean~~



                                             What do you think is the most fun thing to do in the world? Explain.


I think the most fun in the world is playing because there are a lot of games and if I play games, I'm happy.
>> OR: Playing games is the most fun to do in the world because there are many games and I feel happy if I play them. 

The game is not 🎮.
>>  NOTE: I CAN NOT EDIT THE SENTENCE ABOVE BECAUSE OF THE SYMBOLS USED INSTEAD OF WORDS OR
LETTERS. 
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