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김지숙/2024-08-06

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I don't know my future job yet, but I hope my future job can work comfortably and have a job that can make a lot of money.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Your writing is has improved, especially your sentence structure. Focus on expanding your vocabulary and varying sentence lengths in your writing. See you in class!
- Teacher Angela



I don't know my future job yet, but I hope my future job can work comfortably and have a job that can make a lot of money.
>> I’m not sure what my future job will be yet, but I hope it will be something that allows me to work comfortably and earn a good income.
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