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Aside from financial reasons, why do we need to have a job?

ʱ/2024-08-06

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Having a job is good for me. And If whoever gets a job, Its good for themselves. Having a job can give our lives a promotion like more cool home, clothes, car, etc. But, truly important is a job will give me something to do. Sometimes It will be boring or tiresome, but maybe It will make me a better person like having more skill or proficiency. When we do our tasks in the workplace, We can get ours needs and our position in the workplace. Its made us feel like a member of the workplace and in our society. And so, It makes us feel more useful ourselves and self-esteem filled.
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Having a job is good for me.
>> CORRECT
OR >> Having a job benefits me.

And If whoever gets a job, Its good for themselves.
>> And if anyone gets a job, its good for them as well. 

Having a job can give our lives a promotion like more cool home, clothes, car, etc.
>>  Having a job can enhance our lives, allowing us to afford a nicer home, clothes, car, etc.

But, truly important is a job will give me something to do. 
>>  But what's truly important is that a job gives me something to do. 

Sometimes It will be boring or tiresome, but maybe It will make me a better person like having more skill or proficiency.
>>  Sometimes it will be boring or tiresome, but it can also help me become a better person by improving my skills and proficiency.

When we do our tasks in the workplace, We can get ours needs and our position in the workplace. 
>>  When we perform our tasks at work, we fulfill our needs and secure our position in the workplace.

Its made us feel like a member of the workplace and in our society. 
>>  It makes us feel like valued members of the workplace and our society.

And so, It makes us feel more useful ourselves and self-esteem filled.
>>  This, in turn, boosts our sense of usefulness and self-esteem.