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양기연/2024-08-06

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I was impressed by the long and clean beach. And I was fascinated with the color of the water.

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Hi, Gi Yean!

I couldn’t agree more! In Boracay, the beach seems endless, and the water is clear and vivid.

- T. Caitlyn

I was impressed by the long and clean beach. And I was fascinated with the color of the water.

>> I was impressed by the long, clean beach and fascinated by the color of the water.