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What was it like growing up in your hometown?

임주미/2024-08-06

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In fact,I don't like my hometown. My parents was really poor and they could't care of my siblings. Of course I have memories when I was young but I was not happy. Thanks for homework I reflected on my many things.
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Hello, Ju Mi! I guess answering this homework made you revisit some memories from the past. I’m glad you were able to reflect on things. Have a great day today!
~T. Jewel
In fact,I don't like my hometown.
>> I don't like my hometown.
My parents was really poor and they could't care of my siblings.
>>My parents were really poor, and they couldn’t take care of my siblings.
Of course I have memories when I was young but I was not happy.
>>I have memories from when I was young, but I was not happy.
Thanks for homework I reflected on my many things.
>>Thanks to the homework, I reflected on many things.
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