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김순님/2024-08-05

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
between mom and son is first relationship of society. Son learns about society from their mother first. It starts to make a relationship with others. It is not meaning sons should follow their mother. Sons need to judge right or not and they should control their life.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Ms. Suzan,
Family is the smallest unit of our society. We build the foundation of our ethics and charcaters within.
Let's create a productive society by creaing repsonsible family member.s.
Aki~


between mom and son is first relationship of society.
>>> Between mom and son is the first relationship in society.
>>> The first relationship established in the society is between parents and their children.

Son learns about society from their mother first.
>>> CORRECT!

It starts to make a relationship with others.
>>> CORRECT!

It is not meaning sons should follow their mother.
>>> It doesn't mean that sons should follow their mothers.

Sons need to judge right or not and they should control their life.
>>> SOns should be able to judge which is right and wrong and they should follow their our decisions.

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