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what do you enjoy the most about being a housewife?

임주미/2024-08-02

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

First,I often fell really happy and I can have a lot of free time also I like to stay at home and going out too. I think I have been worked for 25years old so hadly. I am enjoying my time these days I love who I am now.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Ju Mi! I am glad you are having a great time being a housewife now. Thank you for sharing your ideas. Have a great day!^^

~T. Jewel

First,I often fell really happy and I can have a lot of free time

>>I often feel really happy, and I have a lot of free time.

also I like to stay at home and going out too.

>>I enjoy staying at home as well as going out.
I think I have been worked for 25years old so hadly.

>>I think I have been working hard since I was 25 years old.

I am enjoying my time these days

>>So, I’m enjoying my time these days.

>>So, I'm having a great time these days.

I love who I am now.

>>CORRECT