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김길수/2024-08-02

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I have been ordered some meal in aircraft to trip taiwan last march. The attendance asked me what would you like meal with meat or fish dishes? I told to attendance to get fish dishes. I prefer to fish dishes to meat dishes. The tast was not good as much as i imagin. The meal served including korean hot pepper source. I could enjoy meal with the source which manufactured in south korea. Serving meal in aircraft is not much option to choice. I can chose one of two. If I go to snackbar, i should have order which gradients are on that. It is ordering more complicate in snack bar than aircraft.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Tom!
Oh. You are an enemy of meat, from what I remember. I want to hear more about that flight story. ^^
~ Trixia

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I have been ordered some meal in aircraft to trip taiwan last march.
- I ordered some meals on an aircraft on my trip to Taiwan last March.
The attendance asked me what would you like meal with meat or fish dishes?
- The attendants asked me, "Would you like a meal with meat or fish dishes?"
I told to attendance to get fish dishes.
- I told them to get fish dishes.
I prefer to fish dishes to meat dishes.
- I prefer fish dishes to meat dishes.
The tast was not good as much as i imagin.
- The taste was not as good as I had imagined.
The meal served including korean hot pepper source.
- The meal served included a Korean hot pepper sauce.
I could enjoy meal with the source which manufactured in south korea.
- I could enjoy a meal with the sauce, which is manufactured in South Korea.
Serving meal in aircraft is not much option to choice.
- Serving meals in aircraft is not an option.
I can chose one of two.
- CORRECT.
If I go to snackbar, i should have order which gradients are on that.
- If I go to a snack bar, I should order the ingredients that are there.
It is ordering more complicate in snack bar than aircraft.
- CORRECT.
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