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김지숙/2024-08-01

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I think watching fairy tales is better for you than watching TV because fairy tales are more educational and beneficial than TV, but fairy tales are not fun for me.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Great work, Shin Woo! Please check and reflect on the corrections given below. Happy Weekend!
- Teacher Angela



I think watching fairy tales is better for you than watching TV because fairy tales are more educational and beneficial than TV, but fairy tales are not fun for me.
>> I believe watching fairy tales is better for you than watching TV because fairy tales are more educational and beneficial. However, I find fairy tales less enjoyable.
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