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How has the concept of "hoesik" evolved over time in Korean workplaces?

박소은/2024-08-01

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Korea's 'company dinner' culture has evolved from mandatory attendance to free attendance. one generation ago, those in attendance ate and drank even if they didn't want to. But people don't force it anymore.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Anna!^^

It's great to hear that company dinners are now voluntary and more relaxed.

~Kelly^^

Korea's 'company dinner' culture has evolved from mandatory attendance to free attendance.

>>Correct

OR:

>> Korea's 'company dinner' culture has changed from mandatory attendance to voluntary attendance.

one generation ago, those in attendance ate and drank even if they didn't want to.

>> Correct

OR:

>> A generation ago, attendees ate and drank even if they didn't want to.

But people don't force it anymore.

>> Correct

OR:

>> However, people no longer feel pressured to participate.