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문병훈/2024-07-31

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people’s succeed in life hasn’t standard anywhere. some people says making a lot of money is succeed in life, another people says getting a honor and social power is it. I think to succeed in life know just only oneself
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Hello, Mr. Moon~
I think the way people define success varied on the age too. As we age, our desires are changing. For me, it was about money at first until it became career growth and now it's all about genuine happiness... 
Chammy
people’s succeed in life hasn’t standard anywhere. 
>>Success in life is not standardized in any way.
some people says making a lot of money is succeed in life, another people says getting a honor and social power is it. 
>>Some people define success in life as making a lot of money, while others define it as receiving honors and social power.
I think to succeed in life know just only oneself.
>> To succeed in life, I think that a person must first know oneself.

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