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류건우/2024-07-31

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Q: How do you budget your money? A: I usually save them, and I use them when I want to. I usually save my money, because if then, I can have enough money when I really want or need to spend my money. I just avoid using them as much as I can.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Paul!

Thank you for answering your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some corrections:

1. I usually save them, and I use them when I want to.

>>CORRECT!

2. I usually save my money, because if then, I can have enough money when I really want or need to spend my money.

>>I usually save my money because by then, I can have enough when I really want or need to use it.

3. I just avoid using them as much as I can.

>>CORRECT!