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Apart from your city and Seoul, which city do you think is the best in Korea?

차진혁/2024-07-30

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I think Buyeo is the best city in Korea apart from my city and Seoul because Buyeo is the capital of Baekje which I like and Korean traditional city. I want to go there but I have not went.
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Hello, Jimmy!

Here's your revised composition from Monday's homework. I appreciate your sending it. Please go over the revisions given below, such as "one day" or "someday". See you again tomorrow! 


Cheers,
Jean~~



                                     

                Apart from your city and Seoul, which city do you think is the best in Korea?

I think Buyeo is the best city in Korea apart from my city and Seoul because Buyeo is the capital of Baekje which I like and Korean traditional city.
>> I think Buyeo is the best city in Korea apart from my city and Seoul because it is the capital of Baekje which I like, and a Korean traditional city.

I want to go there but I have not went.
>> I want to go there one day. 
>> OR: I have not gone there yet, but I want to visit the place someday. 

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